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This is my character Haily for my fic, a Risk Worth Taking. I'm submitting her to 's contest. I did a lot better drawing people than I thought I would, but I know that there's still a lot of mistakes.

Name - Haily Domay
Sex - Female
Age - 16
Hair color - Dark Brown with light brown and black mixed in
Eye color - Brown
Talent - She does vocals, but Kaemon is teaching her how to play the guitar

Personality:
She's sort of shy and secretive about herself. She tends to withdraw into herself at times but acts happy for everyone elses sake. If you saw her on the street she would seem pretty ordinary, but there's more to her than that. She's fiercly loyal and dependable. She easy to get along with and is nice to everyone, but can come off as stuck-up because of her secretive nature.

Her Story:
She was born in New York City to her parents Midori and David. Suffering an abusive childhood, she finally escapes when her mother divorces her father after he is involved in a murder when Haily was 10. Now, six years later, she lives in Bayside with her mom and new step-dad, Shawn, and her twelve year old brother, Jay. She enrolls in Tasaki High school, a school for the more wealthy. Within days of moving to Bayside, she meets the mysterious Kaemon. He's secretive and anti-social, but once Haily gets close, she discovers more than she could have ever imagined. Kaemon's a street kid who's been on his own for the last six years. He goes to Haily's school to try and blend in with the rich crowd, thinking it is the best way to hide who he really is.

It doesn't take long for Haily to fall in love with Kaemon. Through him, Haily is eventually able to deal with the past and and the memories that torture her. Putting her pain aside, she searches for a way to save Kaemon, who's own past won't let him go.

If you want to read their story (well, what I have done of it), go to [link]

Yes, I am shamlessly promoting my book here...

I'm going to submit Kaemon's character too, as soon as I can come up with a picture of him.

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:iconphasexero:
Ohhh I like her :D Her story (Which I will be reading after exams) and looks are great... Nice picture too, and if you want crits; all I have to say is that the hair seems a bit flat, but that probably wasent a huge concern anyway...Thank you so much ^^
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:iconfireflyskys:
Thanks! And thanks for the advice, I'll go back and see if I can try to fix that.

P.S. The story isn't too much along because my computer crashed awhile ago and took the chapters with it, so you can't really read her whole story, but I'm working on it.

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:iconfindingfaith:
WOW you can draw! I don't think I've seen a pic from you before now... this is amazing. I love the perspective, the shading techniques, the expression... everything! And the title suits it perfectly! Instant fave! :+fav:
:iconfireflyskys:
Thank you so much. Although, I don't think it's anything special.

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:iconfindingfaith:
Nothing special? This is stupendous! Seriously, it's awesome! You're shading is impeccable! I could stare at this forever... :D
:iconfireflyskys:
Thank you. Wow, that made my day.

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:iconmithril-dragoness:
Okay, I'm finding this story of yours and reading it ASAP! I love her character (I might just share some traits with her myself:)) and Kaemon sounds like a dream invading reality. And did I mention that I love your picture? VERY NICE!
:iconfireflyskys:
Thank you. I hope you're not too disappointed when you actually read the story. I'm in the middle of editing all of the chapters, though, but I hope it's not too bad now.

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:iconkiranekoxiii:
beautiful! :+favlove:

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